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Elizabeth then hopped into the car and did just what the note said, Elizabeth needed her computer which was Elizabeth’s ‘most prized possession’ on that computer it had all of her most important files on it. Elizabeth’s work documents, her vaction photos, her family photos, her music just everything etc…  Elizabeth then shows up to the location of where the note told her to go at.  When she gets there she sees the black SUV with the bright beams on just like the note said. Elizabeth gets out of her car and walks towards the black SUV with the bright beams on and says hello I think you have something that belongs to me. The person in the car throws a bag out of the car window and drives off speeding fast. Elizabeth looks in the bag and there her computer lays, its broken into tiny pieces now, Elizabeth is so upset all of her files on the computer are gone forever but there she finds another note which was on the outside of the bag, Ellizabeth opens it and it says “My hammer and I will see you again real soon Beth, signed Jones” Elizabeth suddenly gets frighten and quickly gets into her car and drives to the police station to report her ex husband.

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